Mr.Knightley

Thanks for the feedback, you guys. I'm glad you liked it. :D Rakun: It's describing the sunset over the ocean, and how the light changes its color. :wink:

Yes, Her. She's got some pipes, as my mum said.

Hello! I am the somewhat-powerful Mr.Knightley, and I'm here to review your poem! Let's begin.... *evil laugh* :twisted: First off, I really like the idea you have here. I totally ...

Here's the haiku I did for the Writing Olympics! Tell me what you think. :D Water turns to flame As the sun begins to bleed; Silver moonlight reigns.

Hi! Welcome to YWS. I hope you like it so far. :) I'm not really digging your haiku, I'm afraid. I don't quite understand what you were trying to say, ...

i hate that to zomg its so anoying who culd live wit demseves ater doin that?? (Snoink has taught me well. :P )

Too bad they screwed up the ending. :P And who is that lady with the really deep voice? :lol: No, but it was brilliant. When the ice was breaking up ...

Hey there, Azzman! I have to say I really enjoyed this. Your topic is one that I think many people can relate to, myself included. Though I may not see ...

First one: 7/10 :P Second one: I are confuzzled... 6/10 Third: 10/10 Woot!

The activity drop just ended up being temporary, and only showed up in the posting numbers. Visits and pageviews continue to increase, which are the more important numbers anyhow. By ...

What about Canada and Australia? They have some of the most live-able cities in the world (number one is Vancouver, but there's a bunch of Australian ones like Melbourne, I ...

AspiringAuthorA..M., Knightley, and Nutty. They're pretty stunning, and they all did something for me to change my world a little today. I did? Really? How? ...Oh. Right. I'm glad I ...

Hi there bloomc! I'm here to review your poem. Let's get started! First off, I have to say I'm surprised at how much I enjoyed this! The way you phrased ...

Okay, so it changed from just Avatar to all of James Cameron's movies. But you still. Must. Join. The epicness. Nayow.

Okay, so... Huh. I'm not really sure what to say about this. I mean, you have a nice idea, I suppose, but any good that I can see in this ...