Mr.Knightley

*Umm...should I wait to post? It might get a little confusing with everyone in different places, and it's not like anything new has happened that would be worth saying. :P*

To everyone who's requested so far: Thank you! I can't get to them right now on account of a sneaky illness, but don't worry! They'll get done. Stelagineva: Review what? ...

Hey there, Bubblegum! I'm here to review like you asked! Okay...for a prologue, I think this needs some work. The whole idea behind the prologue is to hook the reader ...

*dies* This is genius! I didn't even know you could do stuff like this. :D *will post recommendations later*

*Elinor: A campfire?! We have one? And I think Kelsey is sleeping on Natalie's back...walking awaaay. :P*

Alec Alec's heart stopped as he turned to look at Natalie. "What do you mean?" he asked. "I don't know," she said with a shrug. "You just seem...upset." "Oh, right. ...

Hey, Curiousvampire! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. If you're feeling lost (trust me, that feeling goes away soon), lonely, or have a question, please don't hesitate ...

Alec "It's killing her. Slowly, but it is." Alec nodded. "I know what you mean. I feel the same way sometimes. Don't worry, though. She looks strong. And she has ...

I'll get used to it... Eventually. :D

All set, Nephthys! I hope it's okay. :D

Hi, infernogirl! Nice to meet you, and welcome to YWS! :D I'm a music freak, my favorite bands are Paramore and YouMeAtSix, but I like loads of stuff. Everything except ...

9/10 Because you are my Pirate Queen. :D

*Can't wait for the twist! :D* Alec Alec watched Kelsey stir on Natalie's back and smiled sadly. "She's cute," he said. "How old is she?" *shortness*

Hi there, Nephthys! I'm here to review as you requested. :D Let's get started. First off, I didn't find many nitpicks worth bringing up, so good job! I hate it ...

Alec Thud. Alec watched his knife sink into the ground softly. He wrenched it out as he looked around and threw it again. "Your sister is dead. Stop pretending, because ...