Mr.Knightley

Hm...I'm not sure I quite like this yet, but for small reasons. For one, it's extremely short. Sometimes that works, and sometimes it doesn't. This time it doesn't. ;) Also, ...

Hi! I'm here to review. As a whole, I kinda liked this! I like the imagery you use, and it's cool what you're writing about. The sun continues upwards, Into ...

Hi! I'm here to review. I have to say, this is a great poem. I loved it. The message is completely honest and heartfelt, and I think it's a great ...

Aw, you think I'm awesome? Why thankee very much! ;) *reviews*

Before anyone else reads this, you definitely need to format correctly. Right now every line is jumbled up together in a big sloppy mess. It's hard to tell where one ...

Hi! I'm here to review. I really liked this, Tranquility. Your message is one of honesty with others, but more importantly, it speaks of honesty with oneself. That is such ...

Hi Skins, my ever faithful review-requester! I am here to do just that. Well, since this is just a rough draft, I'm going to skip the nitpicks and get right ...

I disagree with Elinor, somewhat. It was definitely rushed, and could use some proper punctuation, but I think it was a fun read. It's very lighthearted, and I don't think ...

Hi Maki! I'm here to review. ;) Well, I like this *overall*, but there are some things that I think need a little detail: Shoes: I can't tell if those ...

All done. Keep on requesting! :D

Hi Shubhi! Here as requested. Well, since this is only for a school paper and you've already had so many great reviews, I don't think you should change anything that ...

I don't see how what I said is a fallacy or by any means ignorant, I see it as utterly true. That's exactly what I mean. Just because you see ...

I'm a tad confused. How is this in any way a poem? It certainly doesn't read or look like one. :/ Well, poem or not, here are some things I ...

Okay, Tiger! *reviewed* Bring it on, peeps! I can handle it.

Hi Tiger! Here to review as requested. ;) Since these two lovely ladies who posted before me stole all the glory for themselves, I'm left with very little to critique. ...