Mr.Knightley

For living in the city of my mother's dreams. And for having a cruel avatar. ;)

Hey Conrad! I actually kind of like this. I agree with Kammie that your idea is pretty bland and overused, but you've managed to bring some imagery-for-the-soul to the table ...

Hi there! I do think this poem is nice, but it needs something extra. As Aqua said, your rhyming isn't the worst, but it could definitely use some improvement. For ...

Hey Conrad! I have to say, this is really good. I can't find much to critique in this, which surprises me. The dialogue is completely realistic and believable, and your ...

Hey Lisa! I'm here to review as requested. I'm going to have to agree with Coco on this one; your story could use some work. I don't think it's super-horrible ...

Hey Typist! I have to say, this was really good. Throughout the whole thing, I was dying to find out what the issue was between Phoenix and Jett; I think ...

Top 10 Countries 1. United States 2. United Kingdom 3. Canada Oho! What's that, Kamas? Third? I almost pity you. Sorry, but I just had to bring that up.

That was really fun. I'm glad whoever thought of it (Jabber?)...erm...thought of it. :P

Silvan Silvan nudged Aimee, sitting next to him, as Naddod called her name. She bounced happily and grinned. He smiled back, proud of her achievement. "I can't wait!" she exclaimed ...

Hi there Lady! I definitely agree that you need to proofread; Lowercase "I's" are completely unnecessary and definitely distract the reader. As for the actual idea behind this poem, I'm ...

Hi King! I'm here to review. So...your poem. I'm not really feeling it. Well, I'm definitely feeling something , but it's not admiration or respect for this; it's irritation. Mild ...

Rock, why did you delete this? I was kind of excited to read it, and I'll assume it was for the contest? If you got bad reviews, that's still no ...

That's never happened to me. But I have had dreams of reading a book (for example, Harry Potter), and then everything that happens is different and somehow I'm making it ...

Hey Scarlette! Thanks for submitting this. I've committed it to my memory, and I'll be judging all of the contest entries soon! I only have one question, this a picture ...

Hi! I'm here to review. :D If I'm being honest, this poem needs some work. It's very rant-y and drawn-out at parts, and I get no sense of flow as ...