Mr.Knightley

I like the gray. It's a nice contrast. And if ads there must be, then....yeah. xD

Freeport?! Oh man, that's novel. xD

I'm going to expand a bit on what Snoink said. For me, this was complete sensory overload. There really was no end to the metaphoric or symbolic descriptions, and it ...

All-Time Reviews translates into "Let's see how close we can all get to Snoink!" :P

Hey Sassykat! I'm here to review. And I'll try and come up with something that Demeter didn't already point out. ;) Any nitpicks I had Demeter really handled quite nicely; ...

Hola Dreamy! :) I like this. It's short and sweet, and to the point. So...I guess my review is gonna be short, sweet, and to the point as well. :P ...

We did it you guys! :D Nice work. I reached my goal; how 'bout you?

Hey Story Girl! Nice poem. :) I agree with Matt Bellamy; you use description and emotion well in this. For me there was a good balance of both. Some of ...

Not everything can be perfect. *cough*

Hey Lily! Ok, so, first off, I really like the idea you have here. It's a really cool story, and I like that you've put it into a poem format ...

Aiming for at least three, one of which I just did. I'm thinking I might do more though. =)

Hey Harshita! I'm here to review. :) First off, welcome to YWS! I see you're still relatively new here. So yeah, welcome! :D Back to your poem. I think it ...

*comes out of the woodwork* I'll try and do a few. You guys are my peeps! =)

Hey JayBe. I'm here to review. :) I really like your idea. I really, really do. Angels are one of my many areas of interest/expertise, and even if your character ...

Brilliant! =)