Mr.Knightley

*hope you don't mind that I fast-forwarded a little. Let me know if I should edit it. : ) Samuel Cook, Team Charlie : Bunker, W/Hayley 1:30 P.M. That bastard! ...

I'm about to post. Just checking on the profiles again so I can remember how to interact with everyone. :) Should we close the SB to new members?

Woot! *goes to read*

0 instances of the word "Fahrvergnügen" And here I was, contemplating using that! D: Mr. Knightley did the 400th That was 100% on purpose. Trust me. :smt045 Anyways, congrats to ...

I guess I got twelve, lol. I would have done more, but bowling with my family, giving my niece a bath, and trying to hang out with "friends" all put ...

@ Nate: I don't know where it belongs, but I just knew that it wasn't Action/Adventure Fiction. :P Why not? Review Day is going to be an epic, action-packed day, ...

To me, this reads more like prose than poetry. There's no real poetic symbolism or pattern to it, and that disappointed me. :( One thing I think you need to ...

Eight. Anyone who does less than me is the laziest McLazy on Lazy street. Eleven. I beat you so bad.

It's Quillie! Hi! I have to say, this was really good to me. For one, the plot is oober-original and a great read. I love, as Lilymoore said, that it ...

Hey Shaundeman! Here to review. : ) AFTER 98.6 “Sir, I have a report to make.” “Yes Sergeant, what is it?” “Intruders have been detected in Harry city,” The Sergeant ...

Okay, FIRST of all, mister. Capitalize your "i's" and fix the typos that I can see throughout this. Honestly, it's very simple stuff. Second of all, I feel that your ...

In the still of the evening This is such an overused phrase. Any line with "in the still of" as a starter is destined to fail. :P Try and say ...

Hi Spy! I'm here to review on Reviewing Sunday! Woot! :D So. Your poem. I honestly disliked it. Not only was the lack of grammatical correctness a horrifying experience to ...

Hi Screamandshout! :smt003 Just one wish, is all I want. Just a chance, to be all I'm not. This is a very good start. The rhyme is nice and natural. ...

This was awesome! Apart from a few of the things Ben mentioned, I really enjoyed this. I suppose that's because my sister and I play chess occasionally, and this reflects ...