Mr.Knightley

Is there a revised edition forthcoming? I hope so...

I definetly think you should keep writing this story! I would never have thought to write a story from this perspective. The only thing I didn't like was the fact ...

I loved this! It has a dark humor that reminds me also of Lemony Snicket's a Series of Unfortunate Events. It is similar to Clive Barker's Mister B. Gone, too. ...

I think this story is vaguely reminiscent of Clive Barker's Abarat. The setting of the town is much like the one he created in 'Chickentown, USA'. I get the impression ...

I really love this story. I always liked creation tales, because they involve unimaginable lengths of time and power. This has many similarities to a story I started to write ...

My only critique is this: there is no atmosphere! I have no idea where this character is. I hate it when I have to imagine for myself if it should ...

I think this story has good potential, but still needs some work. It was very short, which usually cuts away most of the suspense, which I imagine is what you ...

You don't like Keira Knightley?! Ohhhhh dear.... this could get nasty. :) To avoid (very) bloody conflict, let's agree to disagree on this one. Albeit heatedly. :)

MICHAEL JACKSON???????????? That's crazy! Can't believe it! :(

Love, Sex, Magic In Your Pants

Oh, It Is Love In Your Pants

It's a little cliche, if only because this type of beginning is so often used. Try not to put all of the action into one sentence, or in a single ...

Kat: Yeah, yeah, and oh yeah I like Pirates! My favorite is the third on. In the next few years they are going to make a fourth one, but Keira ...

ChrisyyMilligan- I wouldn't say your writing is a waste of time, no matter how good or bad it is. Everyone got to suck at some point right? :) Kepp writing ...

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