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Re: The Fall of Gods first chapter
Are you allowed to post replies to your own post if it's not just bumping? First of all, thank you for all the comments! I'm torn about the detail sections. ...
Apr 20, 2008 -
Re: Tales from the Forest
This conveys the mood very well, but if something doesn't happen to hook the reader in the next paragraph then most people will lose interest.
Dec 9, 2007