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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Title Pending Chapters 1&2

    Thanks for the critique Matt, I've worked on your suggestions some things I've changed but there's one or two things I haven't sorry. "Stop it." --New line here?Reina let out ...

    Feb 20, 2007


Doubt thou the stars are fire, doubt that the sun doth move. Doubt truth to be a liar, but never doubt I love.
— "Hamlet," William Shakespeare