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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Title Pending Chapters 1&2

    Thanks for the critique Matt, I've worked on your suggestions some things I've changed but there's one or two things I haven't sorry. "Stop it." --New line here?Reina let out ...

    Feb 20, 2007


Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder.
— Ranger