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Morrigan

Morrigan

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Adam

    Well, since this poem isn't about you, you don't have to worry about it! :p

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: woe is me

    Yes, but it's in a different point of view from the rest of the piece. Fixing it so it says "I am a boy in the forest" would be much ...

    Nov 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I ate the sun for him

    Hi there, Kitty, I just wanted to thank you for your thorough review. I also would like to direct you to a very useful article about capitalization in poetry: Also, ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Change of Power and the Queen

    Thank you for sharing your story with me. I'm glad that this was able to touch you.

    Oct 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: V

    Bold typeface is an eyesore in poetry. Thank you for your suggestion, but it would ruin the aesthetic. :)

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Petrichor and Old Books

    The bit about the fact and fiction part probably could be more gracefully phrased, but what I meant by that was that she likes that the truth is clear in ...

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Petrichor and Old Books

    You might not think it is holy, but I do. Making comparisons that make people think differently is what I like to do, and even if it didn't make you ...

    Sep 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: it

    Xe is a gender pronoun for non-binary gendered people. If you want to know more, I suggest googling it before you ask further questions, as it becomes tiring to explain ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny : Chapter 2

    It's also my go-to outfit, but (sorry if this was unclear) I felt that the descriptions of Michael's outfit and Evie's outfit were too close together in proximity and similarity. ...

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapter 83 (Revised)

    Perhaps not. In that case, I would revise the sentence that says "%u201CImelda?%u201D he said in a shaky voice." It implies that he's got a lot of emotion about her, ...

    Sep 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I want to go home, but the world is flat.

    I feel like you're the first person to really understand this poem. Thank you.

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Film Re: It came down to Star Wars, in the end.

    Thanks! Honestly, I didn't even have a specific scene that I was trying to connect the plastic bags part with, just trying to leave the impression that she was indeed ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch. 8) Part 1: Don't Dishonor Lotus Momma

    Oh! The guy was Stephen King. Just thought I'd tell you since I didn't cite my source before.

    Aug 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Love Poem No. 4

    Wow thanks it's a metaphor dude

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: See you

    OH MY GOD this was so helpful. Your review was more beautiful than the poem.

    Aug 10, 2014


I always like to look on the optimistic side of life, but I am realistic enough to know that life is a complex matter.
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