User avatar

Morrigan

Morrigan

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Adam

    Well, since this poem isn't about you, you don't have to worry about it! :p

    Nov 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: woe is me

    Yes, but it's in a different point of view from the rest of the piece. Fixing it so it says "I am a boy in the forest" would be much ...

    Nov 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I ate the sun for him

    Hi there, Kitty, I just wanted to thank you for your thorough review. I also would like to direct you to a very useful article about capitalization in poetry: Also, ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Change of Power and the Queen

    Thank you for sharing your story with me. I'm glad that this was able to touch you.

    Oct 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: V

    Bold typeface is an eyesore in poetry. Thank you for your suggestion, but it would ruin the aesthetic. :)

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Petrichor and Old Books

    The bit about the fact and fiction part probably could be more gracefully phrased, but what I meant by that was that she likes that the truth is clear in ...

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Petrichor and Old Books

    You might not think it is holy, but I do. Making comparisons that make people think differently is what I like to do, and even if it didn't make you ...

    Sep 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: it

    Xe is a gender pronoun for non-binary gendered people. If you want to know more, I suggest googling it before you ask further questions, as it becomes tiring to explain ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny : Chapter 2

    It's also my go-to outfit, but (sorry if this was unclear) I felt that the descriptions of Michael's outfit and Evie's outfit were too close together in proximity and similarity. ...

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapter 83 (Revised)

    Perhaps not. In that case, I would revise the sentence that says "%u201CImelda?%u201D he said in a shaky voice." It implies that he's got a lot of emotion about her, ...

    Sep 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I want to go home, but the world is flat.

    I feel like you're the first person to really understand this poem. Thank you.

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Film Re: It came down to Star Wars, in the end.

    Thanks! Honestly, I didn't even have a specific scene that I was trying to connect the plastic bags part with, just trying to leave the impression that she was indeed ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch. 8) Part 1: Don't Dishonor Lotus Momma

    Oh! The guy was Stephen King. Just thought I'd tell you since I didn't cite my source before.

    Aug 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Love Poem No. 4

    Wow thanks it's a metaphor dude

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: See you

    OH MY GOD this was so helpful. Your review was more beautiful than the poem.

    Aug 10, 2014


"I wish we could all get along like we used to in middle school... I wish I could bake a cake filled with rainbows and smiles and everyone would eat and be happy..."
— Unnamed Girl from "Mean Girls"