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Re: Adam
Well, since this poem isn't about you, you don't have to worry about it! :p
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: woe is me
Yes, but it's in a different point of view from the rest of the piece. Fixing it so it says "I am a boy in the forest" would be much ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: I ate the sun for him
Hi there, Kitty, I just wanted to thank you for your thorough review. I also would like to direct you to a very useful article about capitalization in poetry: Also, ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: A Change of Power and the Queen
Thank you for sharing your story with me. I'm glad that this was able to touch you.
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: V
Bold typeface is an eyesore in poetry. Thank you for your suggestion, but it would ruin the aesthetic. :)
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: Petrichor and Old Books
The bit about the fact and fiction part probably could be more gracefully phrased, but what I meant by that was that she likes that the truth is clear in ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: Petrichor and Old Books
You might not think it is holy, but I do. Making comparisons that make people think differently is what I like to do, and even if it didn't make you ...
Sep 24, 2014 -
Re: it
Xe is a gender pronoun for non-binary gendered people. If you want to know more, I suggest googling it before you ask further questions, as it becomes tiring to explain ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 2
It's also my go-to outfit, but (sorry if this was unclear) I felt that the descriptions of Michael's outfit and Evie's outfit were too close together in proximity and similarity. ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 83 (Revised)
Perhaps not. In that case, I would revise the sentence that says "%u201CImelda?%u201D he said in a shaky voice." It implies that he's got a lot of emotion about her, ...
Sep 17, 2014 -
Re: I want to go home, but the world is flat.
I feel like you're the first person to really understand this poem. Thank you.
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: It came down to Star Wars, in the end.
Thanks! Honestly, I didn't even have a specific scene that I was trying to connect the plastic bags part with, just trying to leave the impression that she was indeed ...
Aug 24, 2014 -
Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch. 8) Part 1: Don't Dishonor Lotus Momma
Oh! The guy was Stephen King. Just thought I'd tell you since I didn't cite my source before.
Aug 20, 2014 -
Re: Love Poem No. 4
Wow thanks it's a metaphor dude
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: See you
OH MY GOD this was so helpful. Your review was more beautiful than the poem.
Aug 10, 2014
