Morrigan

Beautiful. Also, reminded me of a beautiful play that I saw:

Fun fact: it was never meant to be a balcony. It was only a simple window. I'll be back for a real review later.

I'm glad that I've grown as a poet since I've written this. If you want to see better things from me, feel free to browse my portfolio, as this is ...

Thank you so much for reviewing

Thanks, Pingu, I appreciate it.

Oh, I'm aware of that. But I was taking it as literally as you seemed to be taking it below. With the sign, and all.

Thanks, CandyWizard! This was a nice review.

Thank you for your thoughts. I'm glad you liked it! I'm glad that you understood what the poem was about, as well. :)

Hey, if you didn't notice, I repeated the first line of every stanza. That's why I used it so much. It's inevitable when you use repetition.

Layers and colors is a slant rhyme. Also, thank you for saying that about the meter, but I did read it out loud and it sounded all right to me. ...

Also, you don't need a comma in all complex sentences. The way you turn it around has a correctly used comma in it, but that is because you turn "before ...

Also, you don't need a comma in all complex sentences. The way you turn it around has a correctly used comma in it, but that is because you turn "before ...

Hey, I only did it because I saw that you have trouble with run-ons and comma splices. I helped you out because grammar is important to improve clarity.

Hey, thanks for your thoughts. This is about a dream I had. It's vague in the beginning because I do not know what god or what deity told me to ...

And thanks for pointing out that cliche! Does this version sound better? :)