Morran

Not bad at all! I'd certainly like to see more. When can you have something ready?! .... Heh. Take your time, really. But do post. As for this, it's a ...

I hope you don't mind my playing Devil's Advocate on this one. No doubt you have an excellent poem here. I really like this one, actually. But at the same ...

What a fascinating, seductively innocent poem. (I only say 'innocent' because the primary focus, if I read it correctly, the words exchanged that led to passion... and not exactly the ...

I fell in love with the imagery in this poem from the first line. I like how one idea just flows into the next, and I'd say that these two ...