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But you also have a guy who's supposed to rule with no training what so ever in ruling. Most rulers were groomed from birth to be good rulers, and he ...

Show, don't tell!

It can actually make a very fascinating story, when you have a focus on what the MC is being told to do and what they want to do. What is ...

I see. That makes a lot of sense. I'll work on that.

Thanks! I'll work on the details, but I'm glad you can follow it at least.

I'm writing my first fiction/fantasy story, and I'm wondering if you'd read the plot, and tell me if I'm too scattered or if it makes sense? Fifteen years ago, the ...

Anything by Oscar Wilde. Seriously, he has such a fun wit and a great way of communicating his ideas.