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Re: Detachment
It truly has an emotional attachment, and I could place myself in his shoes. However, I would like to point out that a little more background information wouldn't hurt. Especially ...
Sep 25, 2013 -
Re: The Masked
After reading the reviews, and most importantly the poem itself, I couldn't agree more! You bring out the emotion needed for readers to keep reading. After all, it's the emotional ...
Sep 25, 2013 -
Re: Enough (Prologue)
It is true what they others have said. It doesn't seem to fit the normal prologue. A reader will read when they are emotionally engaged with the character. They read ...
Sep 25, 2013
