Morgaine

^-^ Thanks for the crits! I was really worried about the punctuation myself to tell the truth, but I'm trying a few different arrangements. The flow in some places is ...

Oh wow! I posted this like...a year and a half ago. ^_^ Thanks for the Crit. though; I may rework this. *nod*

Very captivating and just a little haunting. It's a striking piece For we are all broken dolls in the end. I particularly like this line. Well that's about it. =3 ...

I liked this a lot...It's really nice to read such a warm, fuzzy poem. ^-^ Not a lot to crit. spelling and grammer-wise but can I suggest 'welcomed' rather the ...

I have to say I liked it a lot. Just the kinda of weird humour I like *nods* And I really want to see Superbad . Can't pick out any ...

I have to say, It's brillent for an 11 year old! a few things to fix up in there that El has so kindly pointed out, but i have to ...

El you know I've read this but I just re-read it and realised that Prmcite reminds me so much of my little sister :)

I thought this book was kewl. Moles can evil sometimes. ~Morgaine

Oh that is A brillent story for an eight year old. I don't think a wrote anything that good!

Ohh i will probaby expand on this soon but not right now as Its in a document i can't reach. ~Morgaine p.s i will put an actual description on other ...

Yea! people liked my poem. Yeah I am a pretty bad speller though. Also i get in trouble for not capitaliseing (is that even a word????) stuff propaly (Spelling Error) ...