Morgaine

^-^ Thanks for the crits! I was really worried about the punctuation myself to tell the truth, but I'm trying a few different arrangements. The flow in some places is ...

Yeah....I was tired, fed up and had been reading Plath. So voila. The first thing I've posted for quite a time. Why is it that I love you? Kisses aren’t ...

Oh wow! I posted this like...a year and a half ago. ^_^ Thanks for the Crit. though; I may rework this. *nod*

Very captivating and just a little haunting. It's a striking piece For we are all broken dolls in the end. I particularly like this line. Well that's about it. =3 ...

I liked this a lot...It's really nice to read such a warm, fuzzy poem. ^-^ Not a lot to crit. spelling and grammer-wise but can I suggest 'welcomed' rather the ...

I have to say I liked it a lot. Just the kinda of weird humour I like *nods* And I really want to see Superbad . Can't pick out any ...

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Ditto Ditto. It's uncannily like Lolita

I found a great program that is so very very helpful for this. My trial edition expired but it's not expensive to buy. Just google 'Family Tree Maker' and you ...

I had to read it in grade six. It really is a beautiful beautiful book. The characters were real kids. I kind of forgot parts of it and mixed it ...

HELLO =3 I've been AWOL for quite a while (a few years now in fact O:). Writing just kinda melted out of my life for awhile. Then there was the ...

Okay i just got a a little crazy but here it is: ~morgaine

I have to say, It's brillent for an 11 year old! a few things to fix up in there that El has so kindly pointed out, but i have to ...

Silence speaks: my sisters gracefully swept along the corridors, their exquisiteness blinding me as they sat down beside their looms and spinning wheels. Adina, Bronwen and Rhiannon they were named ...

Ashrina, swore lightly under her breath, Why did Audra have to always be so bitchy? she would have liked to be friends with the girl when she had first became ...