MoonlightMayhem

How can I make my main character "3 demensional?" My main character is a seventeen year old girl named Serafina Mathonwy. She is emotional and unique, a misfit, hidden in ...

Can I have some help developing my Main Character? She is a seventeen year old girl named Serafina Mathonwy. She is emotional and unique, a misfit, hidden in a crowd ...

The prologue and Chapter One are both up! Please critique them when you get the chance. Thank you.

Just posted the prologue! Thank you for your advice, Rosey Unicorn. You're right. Sometimes things just don't need to flow.

Being that I'm having trouble starting my novel... I was thinking maybe I could try a different approach such as character sketching or world creating. I looked up some information ...

Ok, I definitely need to make the beginning of my story more intriguing and suspenseful. The setting is with Orna and Cedrick (Serafina's parents) visiting Archellon, the area right by ...

Thank you so much, ChunSquirrelArtiste, for your detailed response. I agree, there should definitely be some complexities to Serafina. I will be sure to include what makes her tick. She'll ...

I'm struggling with the first few lines of the story... I've written pages over and over again and I don't like any of them. How do I start off?

Thankyou, artsy. That was helpful. I did add some character opinion into my new novel, so that did at a bit more detail.

Ok, so how does this sound for a backstory for Serafina's parents & their interaction with Rodsha... (I plan to use this in my prologue) Rodsha wanted power over the ...

Thank you, Tenyo. This is wonderful advice.

As an update, I decided to start over from scratch and put the two original chapters aside. They weren't really working out for me. Anywho, I'm looking for some support ...

Also, where should my story begin? I have a few ideas, but I'd like some input. My first idea is to open with a scene that occurred when Serafina was ...

I updated the plot a bit, just a few of my details were added in for additional background. Also, I'm still trying to answer the question, "Why Serafina?" As for ...

Hi, I'm just planning out a new novel and I'd like some suggestions to help me with the details and ideas in the story. Any Takers? Basic Overview: Serafina Rose ...