MoonlightMayhem

I like how you started this off with Angels and The Underworld, that's a good way to catch interest. As for the thing, I was thinking it was a big ...

I think that sounds really nice. It's very metaphorical and nature related, and that's good for openings because they can perform lots of foreshadowing. Good start!

I hear you, but I'm struggling with writing myself. My best advice is this: 1. Relax, and try different inspiring writing excercises, such as listening to song and writing based ...

Thank you. I have a lack of conflict so far. I'll work on that.

Awesome! Ya, I see a lot of potential in this. I'd definitely read that!

Wrote the first two chapters and I'm editing them. They sound very boring and ordinary. Suggestions?

By the way, what is different about the full angel baby once it is reunited with its full angel parents? Does it have human characteristics, or is this just a ...

My basic point is the "what if's" could go like this... 1. The full angel process happens. The angelic child is born, but it stays in the human child's body ...

Oh wups... looks like I mis-read and blended the descriptions of Half-Angel and Full-Angel together in my mind without thinking... sorry! Let me re-work this.

1. Is this interesting enough/ thought through? I'd say it's an original, good concept. So, basically the baby just leaves the mortal parents behind before it really gets the chance ...

Here is a thread to post quotes from famous writers about writing. You may leave the quote simple or add commentary. I'll start. If it's from a book, please allow ...

Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott She's funny, and although hard for me to relate to as a person, she offers good advice. She has a way of telling the ...

There are two writing tips that I got from the book Bird by Bird. One is about character and voice, the other is about the writing process. CHARACTER AND VOICE... ...

Ok, I'm making progress. Anyone who is interested in reading the prologue of Keychain Magic please do so. It has been posted in the Read/Write section and desperately needs a ...

I'd hold him back, and lead him away from the cliff. I'd then ask him what's wrong and attempt to discuss it with him.