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  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    "I wondered if this was how souls felt, waiting for judgment after death." I am in awe. This is an amazing way to start a novel- a deep metaphor, character's ...

    Feb 19, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    7. It's interesting, and obviously, gets you wondering about the character's situation. Good job. Also emotional, and makes the reader curious about the main character's feelings. -- It was a ...

    Feb 17, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: Strong First Sentence

    It was a going to be a fateful day, and I knew it the moment I saw the darkly clad man peering at me from across the street in downtown ...

    Feb 11, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: When life gives you lemons... (a philosophy challenge)

    Accept the lemons, and allow yourself to be zen while tasting their sourness like a monk walking on hot coals until you are immune to their taste.

    Feb 11, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "I feel like I've wasted tons of time on the people who really don't care about me and if I had just accepted that they were different and moved on, ...

    Jan 27, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: You know you're a writer when...

    You know you're a writer when... You have at least 5 books about how to write a good novel and have tried all of them to help you. You've read ...

    Jan 27, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: If you could make a movie out of your story...

    Thank you! Will read!

    Jan 20, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: If you could make a movie out of your story...

    OH! This is what I was trying to say before... Ian Somerhalder (Damon from the Vampire Diaries) as Irvan Boltore, one of the seven gods of Astricka... definitely. He fits ...

    Jan 19, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: If you could make a movie out of your story...

    @nutmegan.... I'd totally watch said movie if I could! What's your story about? Can I read it? OneRepublic sounds like a great soundtrack. I might use "History" by Funeral For ...

    Jan 19, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: If you could make a movie out of your story...

    As for my setting, I'm thinking I'd shoot the story somewhere on the Coast of Greece... it just seems like my story is very mythological, so it deserves a place ...

    Jan 14, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: If you could make a movie out of your story...

    Oh, and for my soundtrack... I'd be creative and use lots of Indie Rock in the beginning, for Serafina's teenage life. I'd really want to use "Beautiful Love" by the ...

    Jan 14, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: If you could make a movie out of your story...

    If you could make a movie out of your story... Who would play the role of your main character, assuming they were totally up for it? (favorite actor, friend, etc.) ...

    Jan 14, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: Your book in one line

    The Chosen One doesn't want to be the Chosen One.

    Jan 12, 2012
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Surveys

    Name: Serafina Mathonwy Gender: Female Age: 18 Race/Ethnicity: French, Italian, Russian Height: 5"3 Weight: 120 Build: Average Complexion: Pale Eyes: Blue green Hair: Dark brown, soft, a tad longer th

    Dec 31, 2011


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