MoonlightMayhem

Thank you so much, ChunSquirrelArtiste, for your detailed response. I agree, there should definitely be some complexities to Serafina. I will be sure to include what makes her tick. She'll ...

I'm struggling with the first few lines of the story... I've written pages over and over again and I don't like any of them. How do I start off?

Thankyou, artsy. That was helpful. I did add some character opinion into my new novel, so that did at a bit more detail.

Ok, so how does this sound for a backstory for Serafina's parents & their interaction with Rodsha... (I plan to use this in my prologue) Rodsha wanted power over the ...

Thank you, Tenyo. This is wonderful advice.

As an update, I decided to start over from scratch and put the two original chapters aside. They weren't really working out for me. Anywho, I'm looking for some support ...

Also, where should my story begin? I have a few ideas, but I'd like some input. My first idea is to open with a scene that occurred when Serafina was ...

I updated the plot a bit, just a few of my details were added in for additional background. Also, I'm still trying to answer the question, "Why Serafina?" As for ...

I'm Sharry and I'm 18. I love creative writing, and I mainly write because I want to occupy myself and expand my imagination. I want to get better at writing ...

Hi, I'm just planning out a new novel and I'd like some suggestions to help me with the details and ideas in the story. Any Takers? Basic Overview: Serafina Rose ...

I want to write a suspenseful and action packed novel about a girl with magical abilities and many relationships. But I don't know where to start or how to build ...

Name: Serafina Mathonwy Gender: Female Age: 18 Race/Ethnicity: French, Italian, Russian Height: 5"3 Weight: 120 Build: Average Complexion: Pale Eyes: Blue green Hair: Dark brown, soft, a tad longer th

As I write my story I have this huge idea in mind for my writing style but I'm not fully tapping into the character or the plot that I had ...

A girl wearing skinny dark jeans and a dark navy T-Shirt that says Moonlight Malfunction on it, along with an album cover on the shirt, featuring a fancy drink with ...

My writing resolution is to show more than I tell. I would like to use dialogue more, describe things more, and build up suspense. I also would like to free ...