MoonlightMayhem

I'd hold him back, and lead him away from the cliff. I'd then ask him what's wrong and attempt to discuss it with him.

How can I make my main character "3 demensional?" My main character is a seventeen year old girl named Serafina Mathonwy. She is emotional and unique, a misfit, hidden in ...

Can I have some help developing my Main Character? She is a seventeen year old girl named Serafina Mathonwy. She is emotional and unique, a misfit, hidden in a crowd ...

OH! This is what I was trying to say before... Ian Somerhalder (Damon from the Vampire Diaries) as Irvan Boltore, one of the seven gods of Astricka... definitely. He fits ...

@nutmegan.... I'd totally watch said movie if I could! What's your story about? Can I read it? OneRepublic sounds like a great soundtrack. I might use "History" by Funeral For ...

Hi. Could you review Keychain Magic Prologue and Chapter One?

The prologue and Chapter One are both up! Please critique them when you get the chance. Thank you.

Just posted the prologue! Thank you for your advice, Rosey Unicorn. You're right. Sometimes things just don't need to flow.

Hi, if you've seen plot overview in the writer's corner, you probably know the basic gist of this. If not, you can always feel free to read it Here: . ...

As for my setting, I'm thinking I'd shoot the story somewhere on the Coast of Greece... it just seems like my story is very mythological, so it deserves a place ...

Oh, and for my soundtrack... I'd be creative and use lots of Indie Rock in the beginning, for Serafina's teenage life. I'd really want to use "Beautiful Love" by the ...

If you could make a movie out of your story... Who would play the role of your main character, assuming they were totally up for it? (favorite actor, friend, etc.) ...

Being that I'm having trouble starting my novel... I was thinking maybe I could try a different approach such as character sketching or world creating. I looked up some information ...

The Chosen One doesn't want to be the Chosen One.

Ok, I definitely need to make the beginning of my story more intriguing and suspenseful. The setting is with Orna and Cedrick (Serafina's parents) visiting Archellon, the area right by ...