MoonlightMayhem

Ok, so this idea is basically a really intense writing activity that was meant to help people form ideas and expand their imagination. Here's how it works. Anyone who wants ...

7. It's interesting, and obviously, gets you wondering about the character's situation. Good job. Also emotional, and makes the reader curious about the main character's feelings. -- It was a ...

It was a going to be a fateful day, and I knew it the moment I saw the darkly clad man peering at me from across the street in downtown ...

Accept the lemons, and allow yourself to be zen while tasting their sourness like a monk walking on hot coals until you are immune to their taste.

I like how you started this off with Angels and The Underworld, that's a good way to catch interest. As for the thing, I was thinking it was a big ...

I think that sounds really nice. It's very metaphorical and nature related, and that's good for openings because they can perform lots of foreshadowing. Good start!

I hear you, but I'm struggling with writing myself. My best advice is this: 1. Relax, and try different inspiring writing excercises, such as listening to song and writing based ...

Hi, I would like a Quick Critique for my Keychain Magic novel which I am struggling with A LOT. Keychain Magic was my big "epic" idea, so I planned out ...

October 27 :D same day as Teddy Roosevelt.

Thank you. I have a lack of conflict so far. I'll work on that.

Awesome! Ya, I see a lot of potential in this. I'd definitely read that!

Wrote the first two chapters and I'm editing them. They sound very boring and ordinary. Suggestions?

By the way, what is different about the full angel baby once it is reunited with its full angel parents? Does it have human characteristics, or is this just a ...

My basic point is the "what if's" could go like this... 1. The full angel process happens. The angelic child is born, but it stays in the human child's body ...

Oh wups... looks like I mis-read and blended the descriptions of Half-Angel and Full-Angel together in my mind without thinking... sorry! Let me re-work this.