MoonlightForest

Thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time out of your day to comment, and I will definitely put your tips to use. As for the overall piece, I ...

If I continue the story, I plan to clear up the awkward bits, such as the part with the elbowing and the professor calling on Tatiana. And I will also ...

Glad you appreciate it! Thank you and I will definitely check out your story :P

As for your question, the professor is supposed to be between 25 and 30. I intended on him being young and handsome, thus the main character's feelings would be understandable ...

Yeah, as for the whole cuts and pills thing, I was planning on giving her more of a backstory. I also plan to work on this a lot more because ...

Thanks for the review! I found your suggestions to be very helpful, and I will definitely consider them while editing.

Although sad, this is a great work of art! The way you carefully organized these somewhat simple, dreary words is perfect. Keep writing, always!

Thanks for reviewing my work, and I hope you have a great Christmas as well! There will definitely be more to come following the prologue :)

Thank you for the review and thoughtful suggestions! :)

Thank you, your review means a lot! :) I will definitely take your critiques into consideration.

Wow, you are incredibly gifted! I was touched and completely moved by this breathtaking story that was given a perfect ending. Great job, and I hope to read more amazing ...

This is beautiful!!! Your characters are so meaningful and your story speaks to me. Wow, you truly have writing talent and I hope to read more! :)