MoonlightAssassin

jujubean05, Okay... Um... This is very confusing and seems kind of stiff. For the most part you did well with using description, but the text was very rigid to read. ...

This chapter is rated 16+ for some cursing here and there... Um, this is a big chapter, I guess. Not in length, but in importance. (This is on pages 9-14.) ...

Tabithalillian, These are absolutely amazing! Like the other reviewer, I'm curious as to where these were taken... Anyway, I'll start my review now. ^_^ And just to let you know, ...

GoaGreena, Hahaha, I love the newest one! Again, these are awesome! Keep up the great work! ~ Moonlight

Before I start, are your characters actually Japanese? Hotaru is not but Miyako is part Japanese - technically. If you want to know the (brief version of the) story on ...

Hi, Sura! I'm guessing that I have to tell you which type of review I want..? I guess I'll go with Harsh Standard. 8D I need someone to tell me ...

It's long overdue for me to post chapter 2 of Shade... So here ya go. Warning: It's extremely short... P.S. Chapter 2 contains pages 7 and 8. I've been thinking ...

Done! :D

cannoncomplex, Hello! I'm here to review as you requested. :) First off, let me tell you thank you for being my first request! Okay, anyway... I'll be quoting some things ...

Hello, sir or mam. Welcome to the ReviewIn'! (Get it? Reviewin'? Review Inn? Yeah... -runs behind random building-) Anyway! At the ReviewIn', we currently have three rooms available for two-day ...

GoaGreena, Need I say anything? This is just pure awesomeness! You really captured the emotion very well. The only little nitpick I can think of is where the wings connect ...

Granted, but it turns off as soon as you find it and the bad TV continues... I wish that I could write something right now... >_

Granted, but you get no new critiques. XP I wish that I could finish my novel, get it published, and have it sell well all in the next six years! ...

Welcome, chickita! I agree with Amnien, you seem like lots of fun! XP I hope you enjoy it here - I know I have! Okay, so I have to ask ...

cleverclever, This is so cool! I absolutely suck at drawing non-anime humans... But anyway, I just have a few suggestions - which you can fully ignore if you'd like, due ...