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Re: With a Dying Breath (PG-13) (edited)
Wow, this is really amazing. Keep up the good work :) Love the stunning, simple way in which you describe everything.
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: The Silhouette
Great story, I love the descriptions. But one thing - the last sentence seeks kinda' stiff and essay-like. It doesn't seem to fit with the story...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Introduction to "Eternity"
Hey, Thanks you guys for all the good tips and criticism, it really helped. Right now I am editing the introduction and the 1st chapter - both will be available ...
Nov 3, 2008 -
Re: City Spirit
Oh. Wow. This is Absolutely AMAZING. I can't find words enough to describe it. Its... so... intensely mesmerizing. I couldn't stop reading. Wow. I like the slight linger of mystery ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur
I fell out of my chair, I was cracking up so hard. I love the parts where Bella declares herself clumsy and something falls on her.... :lol: Its GREAT
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: chapter 1: Wrong place, wrong time
Pretty good! A few comments though: The story feels a little rushed, like you were really hurrying and under pressure to get it done fast. Also, the teacher is a ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: chapter 1: Wrong place, wrong time
Pretty good! A few comments though: The story feels a little rushed, like you were really hurrying and under pressure to get it done fast. Also, the teacher is a ...
Oct 29, 2008