MoonTitanZan

Broken table, oh th' Seer wishes to greet thee, At your doorstep on bended knee,Yet thy merwood legs do not walk. How will you answer the call of the Seer?As ...

I don't know why I made something so riddled, but here it is... In essense, it's free verse, but I don't know all that much about what I'm doing, so ...

It started when the lord of the land opened the red curtains and let light sweep into the room. The liquid sunlight descended like a cavalry charge from the window—a ...

Giant, formless clumps of dark smoke hissed in their journeys from the their mother fires, ascending away from the horror below. Death stalked the ground through flames, swords, and gun ...

This is the first short story I ever finished successfully from a few years ago that I've attempted to edit. Anyways, it's very thick, and the point is not to ...

These parts are to read as a whole, but if you'd like to review the grammer, fly at her. But dividing the story into parts means that the intrevals are ...

As I stated in the previous part, if your confused at what's happening at the begining, its because this piece wasn't meant to be split into four parts. Try going ...

This is the last part, so congrats if you've read everything up to here. If not and you're starting at the last part of the story because it makes you ...

I'm not too worried about the grammer. I'd like it if you guys could tell me which places in it are most confusing, don't make sense, and your overall feeling ...