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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The day my world collapsed

    This is the type of story that haunts you because it is so well-written that you can picture it happening, even though you don't want to think about it let ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Do these even exist?

    Any of Scott Westerfeld's books, not just the Uglies trilogy but all of them. Here is a short list of books that I have recently read and would recommend to ...

    May 12, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: So Wrong But So Right

    I like this chapter, it's a good way to start the story. For the most part it seems realistic, especially the way Emma swoons over Shawn. There's a bit of ...

    Jan 24, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fish

    The first thing I noticed was your descriptions and vocabulary. Your descriptions are well-written but I think you overdid them. Some of the vocabulary you used is more complicated than ...

    Jan 19, 2009


We are all broken. That's how the light gets in.
— Ernest Hemingway