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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Childhood Is Dead

    Eh... But... Eh... That's not true, and... Eh... That's just plain messed up, but... Sorry, but I can't... I just... that was very... in some ways, offensive, but I'll just ...

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Dishes: Part 1

    Although I didn't get to finish reading this, it seemed really cool! While reading it, I felt like I was watching a preview to a movie, because the scenes when ...

    Apr 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Our Nation's Problem - A Poem (for the armed forces)

    This is a nice poem! It's a topic many feel strongly about. I think the title is really cool. Lot's of people say that our nation (America) has a problem, ...

    Apr 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: hashtag

    Do you do spoken word poetry? Just a question. It is true that these hashtags are turning language into something of a brief thing and in a way is ruining ...

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Let's Go Back

    Hello there, MooCowPoop to review! The idea of writing about eighties and nineties teenagers is freaking awesome. I have always wondered what the perspectives of teenagers were not just then, ...

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Planes

    Aw, this is a cute story. I love how you make that contrast between the planes and the couple. That last part, with the plane's lines intertwining with its previous ...

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]

    This was pretty funny. It seems like npwadays, and even in the yesteryears stories are written this way. I can most definitely tell you that this is how some of ...

    Mar 29, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Health Re: Capital Punishment: The Advancement of Modern American Society

    This is really cool. I'd never thought about the death penalty in this way. A little suggestion from me is hat you provide the evidence somewhere closer to the beginning ...

    Mar 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Who are you?

    This poem is really interesting. It seems like an explosion of thoughts, which can sometimes be good or bad depending on the topic. As for this poem, I thought it ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Would you like an apple pie with that?

    This is funny. One, because we just finished reading The Jungle in class and I've decided to become a vegetarian all within the last two weeks.this poem is very "Sinclair-esque" ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: "Smile, darling, smile."

    This is an execellent poem. I feel like it would be something to read to a friend who's doubting herself or himself, and that this would be the extra push ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: Requiem.

    Whoa, what a poem! The last stanza really blew me away: "Soon I'll be arrested..." because I thought of it as a literal arrest... as in the one by the ...

    Mar 1, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Alligator and the Mouse

    Wow, what an amazing story. Even for a kindergartner, this story possesses imagination no other great writer has ever had. The friendship between the mouse and alligator speaks to the ...

    Mar 1, 2014
  • Other » Other, Realistic Re: The 'e' at the end of Secrete.

    This is a nice piece, however, I'm a little confused about what it's goal was-- in other words, what was the whole message you were trying to convey to the ...

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Happy Birthday

    Bravo! This is great! I really like how you kept the mood of the killer alive throughout the entire piece, in other words, you really got into this guy's head, ...

    Feb 17, 2014


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