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Re: Childhood Is Dead
Eh... But... Eh... That's not true, and... Eh... That's just plain messed up, but... Sorry, but I can't... I just... that was very... in some ways, offensive, but I'll just ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Dishes: Part 1
Although I didn't get to finish reading this, it seemed really cool! While reading it, I felt like I was watching a preview to a movie, because the scenes when ...
Apr 5, 2014 -
Re: Our Nation's Problem - A Poem (for the armed forces)
This is a nice poem! It's a topic many feel strongly about. I think the title is really cool. Lot's of people say that our nation (America) has a problem, ...
Apr 5, 2014 -
Re: hashtag
Do you do spoken word poetry? Just a question. It is true that these hashtags are turning language into something of a brief thing and in a way is ruining ...
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: Let's Go Back
Hello there, MooCowPoop to review! The idea of writing about eighties and nineties teenagers is freaking awesome. I have always wondered what the perspectives of teenagers were not just then, ...
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: Planes
Aw, this is a cute story. I love how you make that contrast between the planes and the couple. That last part, with the plane's lines intertwining with its previous ...
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]
This was pretty funny. It seems like npwadays, and even in the yesteryears stories are written this way. I can most definitely tell you that this is how some of ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: Capital Punishment: The Advancement of Modern American Society
This is really cool. I'd never thought about the death penalty in this way. A little suggestion from me is hat you provide the evidence somewhere closer to the beginning ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: Who are you?
This poem is really interesting. It seems like an explosion of thoughts, which can sometimes be good or bad depending on the topic. As for this poem, I thought it ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: Would you like an apple pie with that?
This is funny. One, because we just finished reading The Jungle in class and I've decided to become a vegetarian all within the last two weeks.this poem is very "Sinclair-esque" ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: "Smile, darling, smile."
This is an execellent poem. I feel like it would be something to read to a friend who's doubting herself or himself, and that this would be the extra push ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: Requiem.
Whoa, what a poem! The last stanza really blew me away: "Soon I'll be arrested..." because I thought of it as a literal arrest... as in the one by the ...
Mar 1, 2014 -
Re: The Alligator and the Mouse
Wow, what an amazing story. Even for a kindergartner, this story possesses imagination no other great writer has ever had. The friendship between the mouse and alligator speaks to the ...
Mar 1, 2014 -
Re: The 'e' at the end of Secrete.
This is a nice piece, however, I'm a little confused about what it's goal was-- in other words, what was the whole message you were trying to convey to the ...
Feb 26, 2014 -
Re: Happy Birthday
Bravo! This is great! I really like how you kept the mood of the killer alive throughout the entire piece, in other words, you really got into this guy's head, ...
Feb 17, 2014
