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Revisiting a short story I did for school, changed a lot of stuff and working on expanding it into a much larger piece. Any comments would be amazing! :D Prologue ...

This was my first assignment in my Writer's Craft class.. We were given a the poem How To Be a Poet by Wendell Berry and told to do something of ...

I would make it so the police, mayor or Chief of Police comes to the school to speak with the school rather than just have the principle talk about it ...

Thank you for pointing those errors out to me! I have corrected them :) I agree with you, when I go back to revise this I will defiantly be adding ...

I like the theory! “It cannot confuse us, we can only confuse ourselves”. :D

I really liked reading this :) short but sweet. Can't wait to see where it goes from here!

Please be brutally honest. I love constructive criticism. Currently not sure what to call this. Originally called Paris By Night, but that is already an existing novel. Any recommendations on ...

You completed the task excellently if I do say so myself! :D Great job!

I really enjoyed reading this! It reminded my of A Million Little Pieces which is one of my favorite novels. Good job! Please PM me when there's more up!

I really like the imagery and vocabulary used here :) good work!

ooh now I get it. Thank you very much! :)

I see numbers and letters in blue boxes under rating and just wondering how the system works. Thanks!

The Shack.

You really need to make some serious grammar and spelling corrections. Reading that was like having forks jabbing my eyes. The 'song' itself seems to be lacking original content, or ...

I'm about half way though A Clockwork Orange and it is honestly incredible.