MonoTheElderish

Looking to try and up story coherency. Formatting got slightly..... broken. So try to look past that if possible

Thanks for the review! I see what you mean And this is great Info! The Charlie Chaplin quote was meant to be part of the foreword. I'll work on changing ...

Thanks for the wonderful review! I've taken your advise and am currently in the middle of a total (again) Re-work. I've re-done the event order slightly. It should clarify things ...

Thanks for the review! I'll try to clean up the structure a bit. As far indoctrination goes, In my mind I had thought that he had been disillusioned after growing ...

O_o I started this on a whim, And absolutely(almost) no thought went into the backstory what-so-ever. O_O So I'm amazed that you actually enjoy this. And yeah, I capitalize unnecessarily. ...

Loved this! Keep up the good work! ^_^

Re-working everything. There's been a bunch that I haven't posted on the site yet but that should give a taste of the new material until I can get the rest ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah this is just a rough draft. Hopefully I'll get the time to edit more. EDIT: Yep, Edited. I changed a couple things around. I had ...

This was incredible. It felt like it was in the vein of "A series of unfortunate events" I was biased to this thinking by listening to russian polka while I ...

Thank you SO much for the review! I edited a bit but I'm going to re-edit again when I have the time! Have you read the first chapters or is ...

If it doesn't make any sense I Really recommend reading the first chapters

Thank you! If you haven't already, There's two other chapters that I highly recommend reading first! Thanks for the review!

Thank You! Will do! Editing is on the way! Thanks again for the review! Edit, The spelling of "Wizzard" is intentional. It's so the callsign is more recognizable over the ...

Yay! I guess this is what happens when I start writing a book in the middle of the night. :/ Thanks for the review! I'll go through and edit this ...

Thanks! I'll work on a glossary one of these days then. It actually sounds kinda fun.