Monday

I loved this but it seems to me that your characters are a bit to mature to be six and eight, maybe you should tone down the way they speak ...

Awesome! I really love this! I didn't find any errors in the Grammar but I'm not good at that anyway. Everything seems perfect about your characters and such, :) Keep ...

I really liked this. But, when I read it aloud it sounded awkward and to tightly fitted together. I don't know why... Oh well, still. Very good to read. :) ...

This was one of the best poems I've ever read, it was hilarious! I love the way you wrote this, I laughed at every line. Truly brilliant, anti-pop! Keep writing ...

I really, reallly enjoyed this! And I agree with Stori, Kelsi does sound like a bully at first but then I kept reading and it was all good! :) You ...

That was awesome! It held my attention the entire time. I love how you describe your characters, just enough so I can picture them but not so much to where ...