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Re: Enough
I liked what you wrote about the hurricanes. Upon awakening we find love and beauty as well as hate and destruction. In between both is chaos that is simultaneously the ...
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Re: What we want.
Thank you everyone. I'm sorry. And thank you. Next time I write (which won't be for awhile) I will use your advice. The only thing is... poetry is subjective, and ...
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Re: What we want.
Aha. Sorry dude. I guess I feel like it was already written. I can keep everything in mind for the next poem I write though so thank you everyone. I ...
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Re: Children of a Deep Blue Sky
Touching where you keep seeing. Meaning dreams come to life. Which I guess is what this poem is really about.
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: What we want.
I'm trying to tell you the world is going to end. Duh. No, but seriously though there is no need for me to have this poem mean anything to you. ...
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Re: Children of a Deep Blue Sky
I assure you capitals mean nothing in this type of poetry. There is nothing better than freeverse poetry. Words together as I see they fit.
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Re: Enough
I must say... I envy this. The language is beautiful. Almost too so. You have an incredible imagination that's for sure. However I was surprised by where you went with ...
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Re: What we want.
Drift Down Down A Glide of Peace Down to Earth Not Hell Here There is A heaven To be had to sip upon the wine of all fruits and taste ...
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Re: Children of a Deep Blue Sky
We Sat Crosslegged Wide Eyed Children with minds for soaking up the world and imagining it beautiful as possible we saw the far off lands we tasted the bountiful fruits ...
Feb 1, 2010
