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Moksha

  • General Articles Re: Enough

    I liked what you wrote about the hurricanes. Upon awakening we find love and beauty as well as hate and destruction. In between both is chaos that is simultaneously the ...

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: What we want.

    Thank you everyone. I'm sorry. And thank you. Next time I write (which won't be for awhile) I will use your advice. The only thing is... poetry is subjective, and ...

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: What we want.

    Aha. Sorry dude. I guess I feel like it was already written. I can keep everything in mind for the next poem I write though so thank you everyone. I ...

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Children of a Deep Blue Sky

    Touching where you keep seeing. Meaning dreams come to life. Which I guess is what this poem is really about.

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: What we want.

    I'm trying to tell you the world is going to end. Duh. No, but seriously though there is no need for me to have this poem mean anything to you. ...

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Children of a Deep Blue Sky

    I assure you capitals mean nothing in this type of poetry. There is nothing better than freeverse poetry. Words together as I see they fit.

    Feb 1, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Enough

    I must say... I envy this. The language is beautiful. Almost too so. You have an incredible imagination that's for sure. However I was surprised by where you went with ...

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: What we want.

    Drift Down Down A Glide of Peace Down to Earth Not Hell Here There is A heaven To be had to sip upon the wine of all fruits and taste ...

    Feb 1, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Children of a Deep Blue Sky

    We Sat Crosslegged Wide Eyed Children with minds for soaking up the world and imagining it beautiful as possible we saw the far off lands we tasted the bountiful fruits ...

    Feb 1, 2010


Sometimes poetry is inspired by the conversation entered into by reading other poems.
— John Barton