Moestitia

Kudos, this is a really beautiful story. There isn't much I can suggest, really, but here are a two things I picked up on that you may want to think ...

Operatic Black Metal.

...and dancing the can-can. However,...

Smoke.

For me, a villain has to be realistic - even in fantasy, keeping the villains actions plausable is the most important thing. The best villains come off as being relatively ...

Hart

Cute. 8/10.

Thank you. I've been loving YWS so far. :)

Hi, I'll be reviewing this piece today. This is my first review - so it isn't perfect, but I hope it'll help a bit. I may expand on it a ...

Draconian.

Jane Austen ( I have no idea why... )

I'd like to be in it, as 'Revy' (the character in my avatar) from Black Lagoon - she'd be the same kind of height, or maybe a bit taller, than ...

Thank you for all the warm welcomes. Hey Jas! I'm sure you're a great writer, I'll definitely check some of it out. Great questions by the way, here it goes... ...

I'm pretty sure I used to have an account here, but I can't remember the details. So I made a new one! Anyway, I'm pretty much new regardless. I write ...

Teenage mutant ninja turtles.