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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: City Streets

    Well first off i liked the way your poem flows... but there are a few things that i think should be rephrased or changed like (quote) "Boutiques, restaurants, and everything ...

    Mar 3, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: DO NOT RED

    well where should i start well i can understand where your coming from but you should try not to switch from first and third person it can get confusing but ...

    Feb 7, 2008


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