ModernWarfare2

It's not bad but you can always do better. I can tell these are interesting lyrics.

Honestly...your poem wasn't the best. The whole moral of the story is good, you just need to find a better set of words. Because it does sound like ten year ...

The story is a little quick in parts. Other than that, it's not that bad. Just describe what the beast looked like. If I might say so, but what I ...

Nice story- I miss having a dog. I would elaborate more on the dog than the carride- you made the focus of the story a bit ambiguous, but because of ...

This is a paper I have to do for school and I need some reviews. Please review and help me out! Thanks. -ModernWarfare2 I sat thinking on the way home, ...