Moalex

Hi Shady! I'm currently working on chapter 10, and as you said, planning on revisions, once I reach a block. With your suggestions, it definitely helps narrow down what could ...

Sounds perfect!

Roger that Shady, really looking forward to your reviews!

I have no idea what a reader in the WRFF thread means. Do share.

It's a nice feeling knowing that someone is actively looking to review my work. Albeit for points or the story was good, just knowing it's slowly getting out of the ...

Oh, and just to clarify on the demon terminology, succubus and incubus are the same creature. It's just that one is male, one is female.

Hey ShadowVyper! Just read your review from chapter 7, and now reading your review for chapter 8. Again, No words can describe how crazy I am right now except what ...

Hi ShadyViper! You have no idea how giddy I got from reading your review. Most of the time people just try to point out as many errors that they see ...

Ah, so it is something that I should have known from previous chapters. Roger.

Hey Aley! Thanks for the reivew. I'll make changes for the ellipsis. I honestly did not know there had to be spaces in between them all. As for the semi-colon, ...

Your comments and reviews really do give me the most motivation to keep writing.

Hi Holysocks! Thanks for coming back and reading the changes that I made. I do admit though, not much is mentioned about Cecilia's association with the kids even in the ...

Hey Holiday! Thanks for taking the time to read this over again! It really means a lot to me. I'm also very curious, were you really tearing up? I would ...

Ah I see thanks for taking the time to do this though. This really means a lot to me. And um...yeah you're right. A lot of the mentions in the ...

Holy shit, sorry about not replying to your review earlier. I've been working full-time and I haven't been able to write without distractions lately. Recently I've been reviewing all my ...