Moalex

Dreamy! Thanks for the review. Since you brought up the whole "Show, not tell," now that I look back at it, it's definitely something that can be improved on. You ...

Also, I'm out of points.

Ah, I can promise that the parents were indeed human. Ren as well as Cecilia on the other hand, will have an explanation in later chapters. i believe it is ...

Hi Honora! Thanks for the review! The funny thing is, I actually did have a bunch of part that were italicized, but apparently it did not show when I c/p ...

True. However, since from what it appears that you did not read the remainder of the chapter. You also did not read the part where she's acting vulnerable to get ...

That's not how I view her. That's how YOU'RE viewing her. So once a woman is confident in everything she does, even if it includes hormones, she's a sex object? ...

I don't think you understand. The way my character now, IS what I have decided for her to be. I chose the character for my character to be the way ...

Because she wants to. It's for herself. A woman shouldn't need a reason to make herself look good. If she wants to, then she'll do it. You're right, there's no ...

Hi Rosey! I do appreciate the review, and from what you point out, I understand why this section would be ridiculed heavily upon on. However, unfortunately, I can't accept your ...

But yeah...quotation marks didn't need to be there.

Oh right! And to answer your questions. The reason why there are quotations around 'wind' is to correlate the metaphor and her use of magic. While her hair looks light ...

If anything, I'm going to go over it another two times before I conclude a final draft.

Yeah, personally I felt like there was no need for changes to the part where Cecilia rescues Azel. She was so enraged at the fact that Azel was sold off, ...

Oh right! And to answer some of your questions that brings up a lot of confusion. Cecilia's thought process: Indeed, it is true, despite the things that she has been ...

Just figured I'd update you, I made slight changes, 90% to the fight scene. Exactly as you suggested, less description on what type of attack, and more on feeling and ...