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Re: Last Stand Chapter 4: The Heretic Part 2 (Reframed)
K so I'll be answering your questions one by one. 1. Yes that is something that I'm still trying to get the hang of. I've gotten a similar response in ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 4: The Heretic Part 1 (Reframed)
Yea you're right. I'm still a novice writer. Everything you say I'm keeping clear tacks on ways of improvement. The reason why I made it that no body else sympathized ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 4: The Heretic Part 1 (Reframed)
Thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it because it let's me know that my work is being read and people are enjoying it. If anything I plan on going ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 4: The Heretic Part 1 (Reframed)
Thanks for the praise. Though I would love to keep the chapters coming as quickly as possible. A lot of my work reflects on what I've experienced in real life ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 6: Two Outcasts Part 1(Reframed)
Thanks for the review. I know what you're talking about. I have watched DN angel and I was hesitant on using the trap ideas as a trial to see if ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 5: Facts and Information Part 1 (Reframed)
My reply also had errors. Sorry about that.
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 5: Facts and Information Part 1 (Reframed)
Yea I had a feeling there'd be a lot of errors in this chapter and the previous one. As stated in the note at the very top I did not ...
Jan 8, 2015 - Re: Quest of the Three Lambs-Chapter 2 Sep 19, 2014
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Re: Last Stand Chapter 3: The Start of a Beginning Part 2 (Reframed)
Thank you for the motivation and thoughts. *SPOILER* "In the previous chapters (two I think), it's explained that Ms. Reese mastered all martial art on earth. She traveled the world, ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 3: The Start of a Beginning Part 2 (Reframed)
Thanks for all the criticism. I'll be sure to make corrections later. Though, I don't plan on doing any corrections until I'm done reading a bunch of classic novels that ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 3: The Start of a Beginning Part 2 (Reframed)
Thank you for the help. To relieve you of your suspicion, I explained in the previous chapter that she was a master of all martial art in the world. As ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 2 (Epilogue)
Thanks for the help. Indeed I'm a novice at writing and I still have a long way to go. So before I actually make any corrections, I decided to read ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 3: The Start of a Beginning Part 1. (Reframed)
Thanks for the help. I'll definitely make huge changes to everything I've written so far. I began reading a bunch of books that my friends deemed "the corner stone of ...
Sep 1, 2014 -
Re: Last Stand Chapter 1 The Hole in the Sky (Reframed)
Thanks for all of the small nit picks that I missed while proofreading this. I will definitely make changes later. Right now I'm reading a bunch of books my friends ...
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Re: Love Poem No. 4
Haha, sorry about that.
Aug 19, 2014
