Moalex

I see. Thanks for the advice.

So to say, it'd be fine to just leave it as is if they were talking casually right? Since its essentially not expressing emotion.

Thanks for the review tiger. I'm ashamed at how I used the wrong feet. In other words, thanks for pointing out my flaw. Thanks to you I went back to ...

Also regarding the description of magic. It is explained with better detail in a later chapter. I was hoping this would somewhat keep the reader's interested because I only give ...

Also regarding the description of magic. It is explained with better detail in a later chapter. I was hoping this would somewhat keep the reader's interested because I only give ...

Also regarding the description of magic. It is explained with better detail in a later chapter. I was hoping this would somewhat keep the reader's interested because I only give ...

Also regarding the description of magic. It is explained with better detail in a later chapter. I was hoping this would somewhat keep the reader's interested because I only give ...

Also regarding the description of magic. It is explained with better detail in a later chapter. I was hoping this would somewhat keep the reader's interested because I only give ...

Also regarding the description of magic. It is explained with better detail in a later chapter. I was hoping this would somewhat keep the reader's interested because I only give ...

Thanks for the review. I'll be sure to take your advice and change it up right now.

Thanks for the review BlueAfrica. It motivates me to actually write when I see that people take the time to help fellow writers. I will take your advice into consideration ...

Thank for the review. I'll read over your nit picks and advice and make corrections to them!

I finally got enough points to upload part two of this chapter. Just in case you were interested in the story.

I have no idea how to review this work. This poem is great and left me thinking about woodpeckers.

Hello! Thanks for the review. I've answered all of Ryu's questions so if that explains a lot then thank goodness I'm sorry for the misunderstandings that I had for missing ...