MoMo

I really liked it =). In the begging the story felt alittle bouncy about how she felt about luke, but besides that it was wonderfull. You are an amazing writter, ...

Thanks everybody! I needed some real critisism on my work becuase when I show it to my freinds they love it no matter what. Its a great confidence booster, not ...

I really liked it. you are very good at choosing words that flow really well. I though some parts went a little to quick, to jumpy I had some trouble ...