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This was really good! there are a few things that could be fixed, but the story its self is great. He wasn't there for her last chemo, and after seeing ...

I thought This had some good and bad points. I didn't really get what was happeing in the story but I felt connected to the girl in the story, it ...

I really liked it =). In the begging the story felt alittle bouncy about how she felt about luke, but besides that it was wonderfull. You are an amazing writter, ...

I love these! I don't know to much about photography, because I dropped out of my photography class, but I know what I like, and I like these =). I ...

I thought this was really good! there were a few mistakes, but other then that I loved it. “Yes really, you silly girl.” He laughed I thought this felt a ...

I loved the story! the twist at the end made it so perfect. =) the only thing that felt weird to read was when it jumped to her being scared ...

Thanks everybody! I needed some real critisism on my work becuase when I show it to my freinds they love it no matter what. Its a great confidence booster, not ...

I thought this was pretty good, needs a read over for a few simple mistakes. though I think you should try to get the emotions across better, make the reader ...

This is really good =). I know lots of people who feel this way, you can deffinatly add on to this and create somthing longer and more in depth(ie, a ...

One of my main issue's with writing is the actual writing! I have so many great stories, but I am not good at starting stories, I can start in the ...

My favorite author is Simone Elkeles. I like Romance and any spin off romance (ie. horror/romance) I love all music but rap, rap stinks sporks most deffinatly =)

I Really love the idea, the story already has me hooked and I can't wait to read more. you should probably show more emotion really describe how she felt instead ...

I really liked it. you are very good at choosing words that flow really well. I though some parts went a little to quick, to jumpy I had some trouble ...

She said it would be fun. She always said it would be fun. I just went along with what she said; I always did what she said, because that was ...

Hi! i had a account for a day and I was looking around and felt sad because I didn't have a real name so i created a new account but ...