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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Bedouin Song

    Kammster. This ro-o-oo-ocks. The description in this little poem is superbly done, so good job on that. Also, I loved the way its written and the word choice you used. ...

    Jan 20, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Soul Scratchings Redux

    Okay...so, here I am reviewing your artwork. Hip hip hooray! So, so. As Flower~Child said, it's hard for me as well to review this because it's your own original design. ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Cracking Calcium (Poem 3 0f 50 for Pengu)

    Dude, Jon...amazing. Really good job. I honestly think this is beautifully written. And it rocks. So yeah. Great job. Utterly amazing. Blinded by awesomeness, I am. Really crits. Tata, Jon! ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Prince's Mistake

    I loved this--honestly. Great retake. I will never forget this. It's so twisting, I had not known what to think...besides 'what's coming next'? and everything was surprising. The way you ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: light will be my stepping stone.

    Light will be my stepping stone. From inflamed grounds to glorified mountains. Translucent stairways form and crumble with each passing step. As I aspire to "greatness" walking on would-be That ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Pure

    Hmm. This is...okay. Not great, not good, not awesomesauce, just okay. I didn't like the bold font. It annoyed me. I don't need fonts to tell me how it's said. ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Art Dump

    Whoa! This is really good. I really, really honestly love these and have no critiques....you have a really good future as an artist. I especially love the last few...the glow ...

    Jan 17, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: A Softer World

    I like these batch of photos a lot! This won't be much of a review, but more of me holding my mouth open at how much I like these photos. ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie said hi

    Hiya, TJ! Nice to meet you. Lemme share with you a little quote I learned and have stuck in the back of my mind forever. "Age is but a number." ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Back... after receiving a letter from myself.

    Like other's said--creepy and awesome. So I'll say it's creepily awesome, yo! Really, though. Uber cool, uber creepy. Anyhooo! Welcome back. You'll love it again, just like you did before! ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hopes and Dreams

    Hey, there. Hope you're having a good day! Anyhoo, I like what you're poem's wishes are--so nice of things, what every human wants, in a way. I do think you ...

    Jan 12, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Snowflake Garden

    Hi! Nice poem you've made here. I really like it. I didn't like how you repeated "the bittersweet chills". It felt overused, out of place, and made me question the ...

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Happy Birthday....!

    Awww! Happy birthday to your story! Good luck on getting it finished! I'm sure you'll do it! :) -Mizzle

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [5]

    Banned...uh, because I wanted to ban you! Boo-ya!

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Friends

    Hi, there! I like this poem. It's a very sad subject--losing a childhood friend is so very hard--but you wrote it well. It seemed very neutral, not a poem that ...

    Jan 9, 2010


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind