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Hey there, Sking. Nice poem you've got here. Evokes great memories of swinging. Some of them quite hilarious, so brilliant. As Kammie said, maybe another stanza would help a lot. ...

Hey there, thelastofhisclan (couldn't think of nickname for you just now)! I love Christian poems, and Christianity as a whole; this is probably because I am a Christian. It may ...

This is nice. I like the cartoon look to it. Haha, 43 minutes...whoo. You're a fast worker and apparently you can make good use of little time! That is phenomenal. ...

Here I am, Durrie. Saving the day with awesomesauce reviews. Nah, just kidding. But here is my review: 1. This is...stiffly okay. Take into account what Classy said, especially the ...

Kammie. Nice work. It feels so wierd to review the better writer (you)! Nonetheless, here I am. *stands formal* I like the subject on Haiti. It's so pitiful, watching those ...

Eddie. Harsh reviews...ahh, forever they be impossible with your work. *pats* This is honestly a fantastic, well written poem. The words...the way you write it...all aspects are wonderful, truly and ...

Hey, Cosza. Welcome to YWS. I hope you've been enjoying yourself here. Anyhoo....:) This is very good. A little cliche, but you executed it very nicely! I'd like to remind ...

This is brilliant. Fantastic, fantabulous. I loved it. I wonder where your inspiration came from for this one. :) I don't have any nitpicks, seeing how I like practically all ...

Hi, there! This is cute. Made me think of watermelon, which I oh so very miss now that it's winter. Anyhoo... I like this, for the most part. I'm just ...

Hey, there, Ben. Nice poem you've created here. I really like it. Thumbs up! Like Classy, I think you overuse 'why' just a tad. It throws the poem off a ...

Wow. Durrie, dude, this is awe-inspiring. I love the contrast and it gave me an idea so even better! Yayyy! I really do like this a whole lot. I hope ...

Okay, hey there Amber. It's been so long. You need to come on chat more! Anyhooo... This is nice. I like the shading a whole lot, and the picture itself. ...

Durrie. You never fail to amaze me with awesomesauceness. This 'thing' is so cool. I want one, you'll get me one, right? *puppy dog eyes* Yeah. We need a full ...

Haha. Hey, there, Smiles! This picture has a wonderful originality to it. It's lighting, composition, angle, everything is amazing. You really did a great job with this one! I'm glad ...

Er. The concept, like Junie (Juniper) said, is a good one. But...the photograph is lacking a lot. It looks like you have no face. Hair does add mystery, but too ...