Mizzle

Yes, I know what you mean. Candid shots are good if thats what you're into, however, portraiture is usually more composed and...how shall I say...more positioned, I suppose? Focused on ...

Hey, M! Nice to meet you, and welcome to YWS. I hope you're liking it here so far. Anyways. On to your poem... This is very nice. Quite short, but ...

Okay, so hey there Timmy. Told ya I'd review for you! Anyhoo (boy, what an awesome word, eh?), I like the poem you have here. It's actually quite nicely written ...

Hey, Timmy. I'll review your work after I post this. One tip: review other people's works more often, get yourself known. Chatting helps, actually. Get out there! Tata, Mizz

Hey there. Nice poem! It's pretty good. I do, however, have some critiques...including your... Rhyming. Not good. Seems forced in more than a few places. I could easily think of ...

Hey. So, nice to meet you meslo. Anyways. You spelled stem wrong...you said "steam", which is very much incorrect. Pardon me, I'm a spell check geek. This is quite good ...

Hey, Bubbles...Lava...I don't know you're official nickame, so forgive me if I didn't say the right one. Okay, so this is pretty good. I didn't think it stood out much, ...

Hey, Pen! Nice poem! Like others, the jaundice colored....etc, I don't think it fits. Jaundice and drug. A little too harsh for describing such serenity. Also, nice rhythm. There's some ...

Hey there. Good day (or night), I'm hoping? This is really nice, sad and obviously heartfelt. However, like Classy said (hey, buddy!) I really don't get why you put your ...

Hey there, Dreamer. I have to say this is my favorite poem I've read all day, or at least one of them. The topic is very cliche, but whoa, did ...

Hey there, Lill. Nice to meet you. On to the review. I'm a socializer...waste so much time talking. Like right now. Anyhoo. This is a quite short, and good poem. ...

Hi there, Bpq! Nice poem. By the way, welcome to YWS. It's always nice to see a new member. Boy, did this hurt my eyes. XD. Probably just me. The ...

Hi, iateyourdogx67. If I had a dog I'd be very scared :O. Lol. Just kidding ;) Anyways... :) This is a good poem. In some places, however, like the last ...

Hey, Knightley. It's been awhile, eh? I'll answer that....yes, it has! Anyhoo. This is very cliche, and the execution was very poor by your usually remarkable standards ;). You could ...

Hello there, Herzing. Here to review your...'poem'. Oh dear. I'm going to be harsh, so just a warning. This is not very poem-like. The stanzas are VERY awkward, composition is ...