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Hey, Icu! So, hope you're having a good day. :D Anyways. On to my review of your little poem here ^_^ Okay, I liked this. I really did. Just because ...

Hi. Nice to see you again. :D Okay, so first off, I actually really liked this. The font annoyed me a ton though. On the line after "you could turn ...

So, I chuckled as well. XD. Hi, there, Tranq. Good idea to write a poem instead of actually screaming your head off at them. Okay, so basically grammar, and one ...

Hi, there, and welcome to YWS. Now, on to my review of your poem. So, this was very nice. It had a nice calming effect...and I felt like...hmm, peaceful. I ...

The End of a Dream They tell me to move along, that it's time to move on, but I can't help but linger at the gravesite. Others come to bury ...

Hey, Nito. Here to review, obviously. So, I really liked this. It's a spectacular portrait, all I would say is maybe make the lines of his lips more distinct, it ...

Hi, Catcher. If that's what you go by D: So many people, so many nicknames. Argh. Anyways, nice to meet you. To the review, now... I can clearly understand the ...

Hi, there, Halcyon. Welcome to YWS, too. So, I think this has some good parts (which Imp mentioned above), but you really don't put them together. There seems to be ...

Hi, Percy. Welcome to YWS...and nice to see you again. I agree with everyone else. Completely. Do NOT chat speak. It is, for one, against the rules. Sort of. And ...

Hey there, Percy. Nice to meet you, by the way. Now let's get started. I...didn't like this. I'm sorry. The repetition does not cause any suspense, or 'effect' us like ...

Hi, Aly. Nice to meet you and welcome to YWS. I hope you're enjoying yourself here. Anyways. So, this made me think of werewolves and Twilight for some reason. Which ...

Hey, Chan! Nice to meet you. Okay, so this made me smile...and I'm having a pretty rough day so that's like a whole fit of laughter right now. Lol. YWS ...

Amy! Poetry...oh my. You've been out for awhile in that section, eh? doesn't show, Aqua-a-nator. Nope. This is a really good poem in my opinion, I actually liked it alot, ...

Hey there, Leader! Fellow Christian here. Love your poem, honestly I do. It's very unique and original. Reading this was very nice, most all of it flowed like a gushing ...

You've recieved a lot of tips, but I'm still gonna add what I think. This is mostly just rambling, and a lot of it at that. Barely any rhyme or ...