Mizzle

Hey, Confused. So, you have a lot of reviews, however, I'd like to say I liked this a fair amount. I adored this part: "Broken is how I stand, Lost ...

Hey there, Ahms. I really didn't like this, and I'm sorry about that. I understand you tried to make it funny, but I just flat out didn't like it. The ...

Oooh. I love this reviewing-day, though I'm not reviewing as much as I'd like...*sigh*...real life. It just gets in the way sometimes. However, I'll do my best to make that ...

Hey, Juggualette! Welcome to YWS! Er. Your very wierd. Quite. You talk about love, etc. etc...but then you say it isn't meant to be. ^^ I agree with Snoink. This ...

Hey, Aries, and welcome to our little writers haven--YWS. Tis a wonderful place, eh? Anyways... I hope you get the chance to check out our chatroom. You can find the ...

Dude, Bugwhisker. I wuveh your username. Which means you, like, are obviously...AWESOME! I can totally picture it in green one day...like bug juice...okay, I'm rambling. Hey, and welcome to YWS. ...

So, hi there. :D Like Ben, that over-the-top-reviewer-dude, said...I really love your pattern of: "I'm dreaming... where... where... and..." It's beautiful, really and honestly, and quite unique. Poet

Oooh. I liked this, actually, a lot. The senses you used, very nice. Like Snoinkers said, I'd consider varying the structure. I think stanzas would work well, instead of just ...

Hi, there ^^ So, I think you portrayed the legend pretty nicely. However, what annoyed me is you rhymed inconsistently. There was no rhyming pattern, it just skipped on and ...

I should add, that yes, these reviewers that came after me are right--maybe redo it, take more time, explain more deeply. I realize this was a dare, however, it is ...

One fine day in Obscene Slipper Land, the land of sharp pointy cliffs and icy cold harbors, a mysterious figure, wearing a cape covering its entire body, which was very ...

Hey, Classy. This has been up for awhile, I'd just like to post a comment. XD So, this like, rocks. You already pointed out my biggest comment....the nose. :D This ...

XD. Hey there, Net, and welcome to our little writer's haven. :D Haha. PM me if you need anything, ever. Have a g'day. -Mizz

Hi, there, and welcome to YWS. I'm Mizzle, by the way; you can call me anything, though really...wierdo works too. :D Oh. So, journalism. Cool. Like Nate said, if you ...

Hey, 'Nilla. You're username reminds me of perfume, soap (good soap, and nilla wafers. < If that's how you spell it. So, basically, if you're username makes me think of ...