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Hello there, justbeingme! I shall have to think up a nickname for you soon. ;) Well, welcome to the Young Writers Society! I think I agree when you say you ...

Hello there, Enchanted! I hope your holidays are going swell ('tis Christmas Eve, after all). Nitpicks Corrections (or add-ins/any types of changes) will be in red. Suddenly , I was ...

Welcome to the Young Writers Society, then, Ella! I do think you shall enjoy yourself here (who wouldn't?). 'Tis a lovely place, and you joined just in time for the ...

Hello, James! I hope your holidays are going swell. Like Yuriiko, I also did read the first part of your story. However, I have not noticed much improvement, and even ...

Banned for making me feel guilty about banning a member of The Sandwich Three.

Hello there, JimmyTheMighty! I hope you are having a good Christmas Eve Eve (ha ha). Nitpicks Corrections (or add-ins/any type of changes) will be in red. Fire. It ' s ...

Hullo, Ben! 'Twas lovely talking to you today; it had been awhile since we last spoken. And, I must express my thanks for the request to look at this! This ...

Banned for liking to kill penguins! I shall not allow this; Pinky would be crushed!

Hello there, AnnMarie! I hope your holidays are going well. Let's begin the review, shall we? Just one tiny nitpick: "Goodmorning, Love." He said to me. Alright! First of all, ...

Many families bring in the New Year with age old traditions. How does your family, or just yourself, celebrate New Year's Eve and/or Day? Do you have any special traditions? ...

Hello there, Emmzziee! It seems you really are into the Christmas spirit, as you are writing Christmas stories. I find that I always think of a great Christmas story - ...

Hello there, BrooklynWriter! I hope you are having a 'jolly good time' as it is the holiday season. ;) “Come on girls, pack your bags. We’re going on a vacation!” ...

Welcome to the Young Writers Society, qt11596! I think I shall just call you Aidan, though, if that's alright with you. I hope you enjoy yourself here! YWS can be ...

Hello there, Jessica! I hope your holidays are going swell! I never considered how my life would be when I grew up. This sounds strikingly similar to the first line ...

Alright! Hello there, Inbetweener. I hope your holidays are going well and I must apologize for the slight delay of this review. Now, seeing as you just bought your new ...