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Banned because after realizing that now I have to change my location. :P

Hi there, Hibiscus! :) Memory music, we were swaying once away, I don't like the way you phrased this. It made me go back and read it a few times...maybe ...

Banned for being "right...here...behind...me". xD

Hey there, SD. :) Photo One-- This is sort of weird, lol. I don't really see the point of this picture, it's nothing someone would hang on their wall, or ...

Hi there, Captain Random, and Captain Random's cousin. Next time when your cousin wants us to review something, he should probably make his own YWS account! It's easier for everyone ...

Hi there! :) Whoa, sounds like a fun camp you went to. What's better than a writing camp, hmm? Anyways, the prompt for this is pretty difficult. 103 words, conflict, ...

Definitely. It'll be fun! And, Cass is still going to flirt with every guy she sees. ;)

Thanks. ^__^ So, what's our plan for the plot?

Hey there, Shep! Like Kaedee said, it's really hard to critique the subject of your drawing, since I've never met or seen her. xD. The shading does seem patchy, but ...

So, this is pretty cool. Okay, it's more than that. It's bloody brilliant! The only thing I would say is to work on the eyelashes of the eye, they seem ...

Hi there, Heart! I look in the mirror, And who do I see? A pimple faced maniac, With braces on her teeth. I like this, the rhyming doesn't feel force ...

Hi there, Fatimah! :) Everywhere I go, I don't seem to fit in; These two lines seemed really cliche. >.> I feel self-conscious, In the places i'm in. You need ...

Hi there, Adeera! So, if these are pictures your cousins took, I suggest not posting them here. This is a place for us to review your work, not your cousins. ...

Hey there! Nice to meet you...now on to the review. xD Well, first of all, these aren't anything spectacular, but they aren't too bad, either. They just have a whole ...

Hey there, Wild! Durrie is right. Horse lovers all over the world would fawn over this picture like crazy. The way you captured the light on the tips of the ...