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Hey there, Emalily! Whoa - I just want to say that I really liked this. It has a great idea, and a definite rhythm. Though, I agree - you really ...

Hey there. I'm not much of a lyrics person, so here goes... I thought this was beautiful - sad, but beautiful. It almost sounded like a song Green Day would ...

Hey there, Tamtam! ^__^ Well, here goes... I think this is rather short. Not to judge, but doesn't a song usually have to last for more than a minute? :P ...

Hi there, Kaywiia. I don't review lyrics much, but...here we go. I think you have a nice idea here; though, like Writer said, the first thing that popped in to ...

Okay, I'm here to review now that you've posted the actual pictures. ;) Photo One - This is actually very nice. I can't find any issues with it. Nice work. ...

Hey there, Dragon. I don't normally review lyrics, but I just wanted to mention a few things about yours. Now, I'm not an expert, but I do think this song ...

Hi there, ARBY367! ^__^ This one time, I will give in, There is no need for a comma here. Remove it. to him. The past that binds me, The lust ...

My stone is lonely. Its surface is coarse like the fabric of my clothing. My heart is seedless. It cannot keep up with the time that passes. How many blades ...

Captain Clare Davies: As she read the letter, the Captain tried to keep her voice from cracking. This letter was causing her so much pain - to read it again ...

This photo is really kind of an experiment. Experiments are good. Anyways... This poem has a vintage-y feel to it, and I like that! The way you manipulated the light ...

Hi there, Al3xx! ^_^ My corrections are in red, whilst the words/phrases I think you should remove are in blue. The summer breeze blew against my face and I took ...

Hi there, Blackbird! ^__^ Kiss my bee-stung lips, Drive the splinters into my skin, Thrust until I can’t breathe. This was a very nice opening stanza. Well done. Lift your ...

Hi there, thatboy! It's nice to meet you! ^__^ I start my journey home, Walking past daffodil bay, I love these two lines. ^^ Walk past a man drowning and ...

Cassandra Trestice: Cassandra Trestice may have been the queen of partying, but she had never pulled an all-nighter. She shrugged - she would decide later. Turning to the group of ...

East coasters represent! Woot! :D Yeah. We represent. :P